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I can be weak-
If thats what you need.
I can be strong
Should it mean we get along.
And I,
Can supply what you need.

And should you ask...

I'm prone to be known
As a saviour.
I do what I'm told
For a favour.
Your saviour.

I can be sweet-
If thats what you seek.
I can be bad
Should it make you awful glad.
And I,
Can't deny what you need.

And should you ask...

I'm prone to be known
As a saviour.
I do what I'm told
For a favour.
Your saviour.

I can be bland-
If thats what you stand.
I can be wrong
If it makes you sing along.
Cos I,
Must apply to your needs

And should you ask...

I'm prone to be known
As a saviour.
I do what I'm told
For a favour.
Your saviour.
©2005-2009 ~JaneyPoos
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No idea where this goes.

this song kinda jus' came out- something about changing yourself to please someone.

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This reminds me of my friend. I love it. This is some great work. Definitely a fave. :+fav:

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What if I'm the kindest demon? Something you may not believe in.
Nice poem, the rhyme seems a little stressed at some points but it flows quite well.

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Who died and made you Keats? You get a cookie if you figure out the joke!

Moving to a new city!
:) Thank you muchly my dear :hug:

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"Ain't not'in' but a muffin, we got alotta butter to go." :music:

"I pay the rent in this raggedy mutha f**** and all you do is suck up food and heat"
Hey thanks :) - the reason parts are so stressed is because its intended to be sung.

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"Ain't not'in' but a muffin, we got alotta butter to go." :music:

"I pay the rent in this raggedy mutha f**** and all you do is suck up food and heat"
nice song-its simple easy to understand good words and flows very well.i was hoping there was another verse coz i was really enjoying that hehehe well carnt pleae everyone :P

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It aint how many times you fall down,its how long it takes you to get back up that counts
Thank you very very much for your kind words :) I have plenty of other poems and songs knocking around in my gallery which you are free to perusial of course.

thank you for the fave :hug:

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"Ain't not'in' but a muffin, we got alotta butter to go." :music:

"I pay the rent in this raggedy mutha f**** and all you do is suck up food and heat"

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