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I breathe the dark.
I live in her.
I am with her.
She is me.
I am not afraid to tease her
She loves it and I agree.
She plucks light from the empty
She gives all that she can be.
I live in her.
I am with her.
She is every bit of me.

I taste the touch
As she undresses.
I live in her
She is me,
I felt the punch
As she carresses.
I am with her
She is me.

I smell the fear
I live in her.
I am with her
She is me.
I fear I could never please her
I am not what she wants me to be.
She plucks my heart with her septor
She stops me as I try to breathe.
I live in her,
I am with her,
She is every part of me.
©2004-2009 ~JaneyPoos
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Written from a blokes perspective. Quite nice,one of my faves.

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:iconevanescingintonight:
Hm...that's pretty interesting... I like the idea for doing it from the guy's perspective...very nice! I have one like that...I think it's called "watching", lol..It's about a stalker. Anyways, this really is great, it has a wonderful and even flow and the concept itself is freaking brilliant.
:iconjaneypoos:
Thank you sweetheart. I have a few from the blokes perspective, a couple on here are 'Then Back When' and 'Reply to Wanting and Waiting' they're quite good but this is still probably my favourite, I felt it was a good theme.

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"Ain't not'in' but a muffin, we got alotta butter to go." :music:

"I pay the rent in this raggedy mutha f**** and all you do is suck up food and heat"
:iconevanescingintonight:
It really was a brilliant theme!! I'm still amazed. I'll definitely have to go check those out!! Thanx ^^

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